taking stock of my work

I believe i told my story as well as i could while still keeping it as pref as possible. i think i show my feelings the best, i try to make the reader understand the way i'm feeling when i'm writing. i think my professionalism could be improved on greatly. Coming up with ideas comes easily for me, but starting to write is the hard part. I start with what the stories about then i just get right into tell the story form the begining. I didn't use andy photographs or any graphics of any kind. My responses were positive so it gave me courage in what i wrote. i would go more into detail and try to sound more professional.